He stared.
She blushed.
He winked.
She smiled.
"Hey!
"Shree Ranjani...”
"Huh?"
Her smile faded. "I'm Shree Ranjani."
"What kind of a name is that?” he murmured, looking away.
There was silence, haughty and upsetting.
He jumped off the slowing train. He tripped. His low waist jeans lay on the ground.
She laughed. Mirthfully.
10 comments:
cool...girls win at the end is it??HUH!!!i mean he was wrong..what is so bad in her name ranjani is an entertainer rather a person who makes you happy...in the end the guy made her happy by falling down...:)
karma boomerang heh.thank god no cheesy last line twist 55..free
whoa.
:O
wow you have got some skill there :P
huh?
what's wrong in the name ?
@ K
hahahaha... bullshit. He didn't 'make her happy' on purpose.
@ Soin
Yeah. Thank God. Watch out for the rest. =P
@ Ki
<3
@ djd
55 words and you make a decision?
@ Asit
ASk Leon. =P
i LOVE it =D
nice work...loved it.
ur added to my daily update of daily crushes on my blog :P
@ Shreya
=)
Thankyou.
@ Vagabond
Hehehehe... *blush*
How does that work again?
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