There was a party
There were girls
There were guys
Both naughty and nice
There was tuneless singing
and chicken dancing
But for her, the fun had not yet begun
Because he hadn't come
She looked out the door
And down the street
she got a little worried
It was her birthday
She wanted him there
He was the only one who mattered
The one who truly cared
No, he wouldn't miss it
'Not for the world'
Was what he said
word -to- word
But something was wrong
She could sense it in her soul
There was nothing left anymore
in the punch bowl
There was nothing left anymore
in the punch bowl
It was her birthday
As the last person said goodbye
Her heart did ache
Nevertheless, patiently she waited
Nevertheless, patiently she waited
Beside her uncut cake
Then there was a phone call
She was in a stupor
She rushed to the hospital
Was this really happening to her?
This pretty girl had no family
Sure, there were friends
But you need someone to call your own
And he was all hers
It was her birthday
He had never judged her
He hadn't thought her 'cold'
He knew below all that fear
Was a loving heart of gold
Her head was rushing
Her heart, pounding
When she entered the room
A tiny box lay next to him
She opened it to look
There it was, her present
A beautiful gold ring
It was her birthday
The day she was born
And the day her heart died
137 comments:
:( :( :(
beautiful
but heart-breaking :(
P.S. why sho saddie? :(
P.P.S. 1st time 1st, so yayy! :)
I felt like a sad poem.
When did YOU begin to bother about being first?
*Twisted is crying loudly*
sarcastically?
awww
:big hug:
*hugs back*
wow...First time reading a poem in your blog....But I don't like a sad poems....
btw the line "It was her Birthday" reminded me of 50 cents's In da club song :P
Usually, noone like sad poems.
I haven't heard of the song you mentioned.
Pardon my ignorance.
That is really sad. This shouldn't happen to anyone. Hmmm..the last two lines are too good.
sad new year... :( ...nice post btw
Hmmmmmmmm ...... good to see u also pen down some sad poems !!!
It is sad to grow old but nice to ripen ............ ;-) What say ??
@ Rahul
Thanks.
@ Rahul Vishwanath
Two Rahuls in a row! :P
Ripen? :P
What does THAT mean?
*sniff*
*sob*
*sniff*
I liked it though :)
<3
Excellent !!
*sniff* *sniff*
what a tragic end!! :(
@ Pheonix
Tell me about it!
@ Candy!
My OWN poem
beautiful!! though I don't really like sad endings but that is how life is.. :(
Yes. You took the words out of me.
plz diu, be merciful.. :(
u dint have to kill the guy...
u dint have to make us cry...
No, I didn't want to kill him..
'coz he was committing..
with the gold ring...
aaaaaaaaawweyyy!! this is tragic but beautiful!!
thankee
2 Rahul's was a Bingooooooooo
Ripen? ....... Hmmmmmm !! Adding humour to ur sad poem ..... ;-)
It's different ;D
Two Rahuls one after another. Again!! :D
Do you guys DECIDE this? Or is it a Rahul-connection? ;)
@ Rahul Viswanath
Bingo AGAIN man!! LOOK!
@ Rahul
It's nice!
;)
could be the "Rahul-connection" as Divi pointed out (minus the Dostana angle) ;)
It has to be the Rahul connection.
The Dostana angle.. well... I hadn't really thought of it that way. But now that you mention it.... :P
damn.... :D
Lets see what your buddy has to say about this when he returns! :P
ROTGL ...... Again !! Have fun ;-)
:D
AGAIN!!!!!!!!
:D
Dostana? :P
damn Divi, I dont know what your real name is, but I would really like to call you Miss Mischievous of the Universe...getting on my nerves the first time I commented on your post..looks like we have to fight a long way ahead x-D
My friends call me Divi. Or Diu.
(And some other names which I cannot publicly mention for the sake of my reputation in the blogger kingdom.)
;)
I like that name you gave!
*evil laugh*
The other Rahul dropped by, DID NOT DENY dostana, and left.
So, there HAS to be something. Na?
*coughs loudly*
*grins*
PS: Yes of course!! Stay back and fight. I'd like that very much.
damn, am coming..keep a watch by your bedroom window.. x-D
*evil non-stop laugheter*
*echoes endlessly*
*jams your brain*
*scares you out of your wits*
*you keep thinking and thinking and...*
First floor. I'd LOVE to see you climb the walls. :P
Scared? NAH.
I have an exam tomorrow. THAT, is scary, considering the amount I've studied for it!
I promise I'll wish you best of luck tonight ..
*you are trying to decipher how is that*
(Did you use to write plays? I mean putting stars and situation descriptions like that?? ;) )
Nope.I haven't written a play in my life.
I have started writing some, but couldn't find decent enough endings.
The luck, I'll need it. So, hurry!!
*looks out of the window*
Hey look!! It's you!
*looks again*
No, that's a monkey.
Or is it.................
:P
to be continued tmrw after ur well-performed exam sis...I sleep at night..keep a watch out till then...
and wat did u mean by BUD in my blog??
Yes, yes. Thanks. I need my sleep too. Blogger is VERY addictive!
Rahul V called you 'bud'. I just quoted him and coughed. I can't put it 'STRAIGHTER' than that.
Oh my God. What an amazing pun!
I'm good! ;)
:D
Good night, mate.
damn...whats pun now? cant u type fun properly u mischievous lil gal or what? x-D
*thunder*
A pun or paronomasia is a phrase that deliberately exploits confusion between similar-sounding words for humorous or rhetorical effect.
:P
Don't mess with me, man.. Don't mess with the DIVINE diu.
this is it..it was destined to be this way..u think u can hide yourself in Manipal..you are yet to understand the meaning of the word mess dear..then you can laugh on as much yourself as much humourously as you want to ...
*several claps of thunder*
actually I was thinking why you took up the Dostana topic so well ;) ?? I think now my thinking is in the right track ;)
Sad sad sad.
I feel like bursting out crying. Seriously.
Pich. The last para was awww..
You wrote it?
Was wuunderful,milove! :(
I guess you both must have slept @Rahul n @Divinediu .....
Climaxxxx ..... Rahul is my dear kumbh mela bro......... ;-)
Very touching, particularly the last lines...
Rahul V, I don't know how come you missed Diu there, she was one of the sadhus, ;) , standing right opposite to me..I went there on a holiday ;)
heart wrenching!
now dats so mean...
picture dis : I am coming home after having this really bad day at school, hoping to cheer myself up by reading your cheerful posts, and this is what I get???
Tch Tch
Sheesh man, I m really jinxed...
(don't take any of that seriously)
My vocabulary's pretty limited at this moment of time so all I can say is:
Superb, fantastic, mindblowing, history (excuse the history pun)..
:):D:P:B
@ Rahul
huh huh huh?
O_o
@ Rahul again
I respect 'people like you'
:P
1st:
How was ur exam...?
2nd:
Being a traveller, I really took many snaps of the sadhus there, along with you(as you were one of them), at kumbh mela, as Rahul V pointed out..I was wondering why you loved this topic so much..there seems to be something I don't know about you !! x-D
@ Crystal
Yes, I wrote it!!
Why are people asking if I wrote this poem? :P
@ Rahul Viswanath
Oh.. Same name-bhaiyas? :P
Since you have voluntarily overlooked my reply, I consider there's something that I don't know about you x-) ... Hoping to meet Rahul V and you next time I travel to Kumbh Mela
@ Dewdrop
:)
@ Rahul
Sadhu, yes!!
:)
the sadhus at kumbh mela are special..do a Google Search..am glad to hear that you are one of them.. :-o
@ Jagjit
:)
@ Rahul
BRB. ON PHONE.
@ Pretty Feet
I HAVE to write a happy poem now!
:)
Thankyou
Thankyou
Thankyou...
*takes a bow*
@ Rahul
1. Exam went okay. Better than expected. Will pass.
Well, I'm not going to insult sadhus. So will shut up. :)
I too..I don't like real life Dostana ppl like you..who pretend to be naga sadhus !! :P
Congrats btw!!
You don't like people like me?
Then why do you talk to them?
Go away.
X(
I am LOST !!! I guess u both had fun on Kumbh Mela stuff .......
Good going ..... ;-)
He said he doesn't like talking to people like me.
O_o
great...i m waitin for it so u better do it fast...
yeah?
next post.
definitely.
dedicated to thee?
@divine(now am sure)diu
Oh, so you are actually one of them! I, therefore, have all my due respect for you. I thought you were pretending. :P
For your info, I like everything under this sun that has truth and value in it.
@Rahul V
I guess Diu still doesn't know about the sadhus of the mela, which she claims she is ;)
nice, lots of things have happened since my last visit..
can we have that deleted 'so it was post'.. up again?
@ Rahul
I am me. Not a sadhu.
Just divine.
:)
Soak it all in!!
@ Divesh
You're backkkkk!!
Blog Kumar missed you.
So did 'Love life or....'
I got emotional and took that post off. :P
@Diu
That makes us what we were two days back. I am myself, the unique me. Accept it.
I hadn't accepted it then?
Haven't I soaked it all in yet?? :-)
Was I ever so confused in a conversation?
Its really getting into a nice chaos here... :-D express yourself what you are!!!
How can I express something I am not?
Same here :-(
Birds have black eyes.
Finally the air was getting crystal clear :-) ..now what is this black eye supposed to mean? :-(
Unrelated statement because nothing else was making sense anyway.
Friends? :-)
I wanted a "Yes!!" :-)
Makin ppl 2 cry ah????
heart died ?? why why why???
oh i thought it died because of love , like when u stop breathing when u see that someone ???
but cool first attempt :)
@ Rahul
Then a yes it shall be!
@ Vijayshryaln
And me too.
@ I'll try to be truthful
This wasn't my first 'attempt'!!!!
I write poetry!
No. He actually stopped breathing.
some words just prove that my emotions are not yet dead!! beautifully written girlie.
emotions don't die.
never.
even being numb is an emotion.
Looking forward to your nxt post..have you noticed the number of comments in this one.. ;)
Oh yes, I did!
:D
Ninety!
(My fav number) X (my fav number+1)
tu sad sad kab likhne lagi??
and noooo birthdays are supposed to be nice and merry and sweet!! x(
btw, i notice your comments are as entertaining as your blog :P ;)
If you read closely, you'll find multiple sad things in the poem.
I won't list them out 'coz its to sad to even do that.
And you actually read the comment section?
Dhanyavaad ji!
may be u r right!
don't get emotional...
suggestion: rivets could be better than buttons on the denim patch.
and yeah as u haven't yet made up ur mind abt the name thing....u can think of an oxymoron(if u still care), people tend to remember them well..
gosh, blogger is so addictive !!
*tight heart to heart teary hug*
Sobs * aww's* sobs.
I loved it, I swear!
Love you.
And woman? I miss your comments on my stupid posts. :'(
WHERE are you?????????????
@ Sawan
Maybe I am!! :)
@ Divesh
Why shouldn't I get emotional? :P
Yeah.. The name. Argh. I got a great one that day. I saved it in my cellphone. The cellphone got attacked by a virus, the memory got erased, and so did the name! If you were around, you'd have remembered it for me! :(
*sighs*
Well...rivets...erm... 97 rivets? Not a pretty sight!! But buttons!!
They can be colourful and have different designs, shapes and sizes.
Hence, buttons.
@ Rahul
Tell ME about it!!
I'm supposed to be studying.
(AGAIN)
@ nil
*hug*
I commented!!
:)
Who will be hundred?
Mr/ms hundred gets a special something in the next post! :D
me !! who else can break our bond :)
I have diluted my special in the innumerous comments ...my apologies..
I had an inkling it was gonna be you.
So what DO you want?
BTW, I'm still not clear why you apologized.
You wanted a special 100th comment..or you wanted to gift something special?? ;) the air starts getting filled with confusion again.. :D
hahahahaha......
I SO want to make this more twisted than it already got, but, I'll spare you coz I'm in a good mood.
I didnt need a special comment. I just said that the person who'd comment #100 would get something special. What do you want?
Gosh, that's much better :)
Time to think of what you can give rather than what I want :)
:D
Sure.
Just remember.. You HAD a chance.
Come on ;)
Give your options..you have known me so well in the last 48 hours ;)
And what is HAD..it shud be HAVE..unless of course you dele my posts :)
EEee!
Love you.
sad...the virus thing.
universe is conspiring against the name change..so forget it for now.
buttons - justified.
@ Rahul
You could have asked for the stars!!
But............you left it to me.
Lets see what happens. :P
@ Nil
Love you too.
@ Divesh
Which is exactly why I should keep at it!!
Nah. I'm kinda lazy for that.
Justified na?
*grins broadly*
YOU, take care.
Your last post wasn't too cheery.
"Mamma, can you plz get me the moon and the stars ..."
Am not so foolish to desire something like that... :)
*yawns, doesn't give up, goes for dinner*
I expect something better and realistic :) ...work out some options ..you stay in Manipal..reknowned for its intellectual activities in colleges and universities..don't let it down
*winks*
*awaiting the options*
Hellooooooo wass cooking ??
@Divinediu n @Rahul ..... ;-)
Diu following Ki's footsteps towards Ishaan ............
@ Rahul
Go have dinner.
@ Rahul V
Huh?
Are you crazy, mister?
*has already gone, but awaiting options, winks infinite times* ;-)
Oh God.
What ARE you hinting at?
anything except planetary objects ;-)
Wish -
My dream..getting through G o o g l e .. :-) ...am presently in TCS.. hope your divine intervention assists me here, dear Diu.. :-)
@Rahul - dear Diu.. :-)
Make me Cough Cough Cough like Diu !!
@Rahul
U think I joked abt my dream??
@Rahul - Not sure on that .....
I am out of this cameo between U n Diu .......
@Divinediu - Do not get Rahul wrong .... He was just pulling ur leg !
He said he is off for tmrw the whole day and he also mentioned that hope you do not get him wrong !!
So we all are FRIENDS again .......
@ Rahul
I'd have asked for a planetary object coz thats almost impossible to get...........but..............we're different people.We think different.
@ Rahul
Wish:
Rahul, like I said, you lost your chance. Too late to ask for anything.
@ Rahul V
You, mister.. want a cough drop??
:P
@ Rahul V
Wow! He's free today? (It's 6:00am)
Wow.
I am not, though.
:P
@Diu - U one sporty gal .... get going !! So last examzzzz ???
Goodluck gal !!!
beautiful divinediu
i liked the way u have expressed ...and yes i need to knw the reason for the sad poem
and yes advanced happy bday
sorry was off for some work today..
@Diu
How clever..desiring & opting to gift the impossible... :D
Cheers...!!
@ Rahul V
I know!!
It went well! :)
@ Rahul
I have no idea what you're talking about.
@ The Solitary Writer
Ste, Thanks!!
The reason for the sad poem?
Well, THAT I cannot tell you! :(
:( another confusion :(
Clear explanation: Why impossible gift? :)
what impossible gift?
as u said "I'd have asked for a planetary object coz thats almost impossible to get........" .. why not ask for a possible wish
I really feel this gift topic u started has got boring.. :-|
Yes, indeed.
u too..... funny child.. to cry.... ;)
sad..but beautiful..touching..
well diu knows poetry also
nice poem sad but :(
thankyou djd
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